Monday, April 13, 2009

Love Is In You

Love is not just saying I Love You when you don’t mean it
Love has to be shown in a way you both feel the same thing
Have you ever felt in Love?
Well your not
Love is not when you feel butterflies in your stomach
Love has the meaning of both ways
There is abuse and real love
Abusing woman is pain for woman
There are many tears and hate in this love
Real love is when you have respect each other,
Having a good relationship
When you are in love you always have problems you are never perfect
Guys can men that think they have their life easy but they don’t
Woman have to suffer way more even if your are a mother
So before you do something think of your future
This is the love you should feel in your heart with your other half
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10 comments:

  1. AlexyApril 13, 2009 at 10:06 AM

    Wow Zuly I love your poem.
    You are right in everything you wrote in the poen.
    Good Job! :]

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  2. micahel joeApril 13, 2009 at 11:57 AM

    its all about woman...

    boys can feel same thing too! =) lolz

    .......................

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  3. ElizabethApril 13, 2009 at 12:16 PM

    Really like the poem..but check it again and make sure it makes sense

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  4. JoseApril 14, 2009 at 7:49 AM

    MiCHAEL IS RIHT LOL
    WE CAN FEEL TOO
    LOL ^_^ LOL

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  5. LocoApril 14, 2009 at 8:29 AM

    Very nice poem i liked it ...

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  6. BernieApril 14, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    Nice poem zuly....
    but Eli was right some part doesn't make any sense...

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  7. amberApril 14, 2009 at 11:53 AM

    nice poem zuly i think eli is right, some parts dont make sense..and michael is right some guys do have feeling to lolz..besides that it is good i like it. :D

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  8. crystalApril 14, 2009 at 11:57 AM

    it was really good zuly.
    good job. :)

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  9. LorenaApril 14, 2009 at 12:01 PM

    Nice poem Zuly
    Ireally like it

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  10. AlexyApril 14, 2009 at 12:10 PM

    whoops my bad i meant to say poem not poen lol sorry...

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